Can someone check my sonnet?
I need to do a sonnet for class, can some one check it and say whether or not i did it correctly? It should just be a regular Shakespearean sonnet, but my teacher won't mark off the stressed and unstressed in the iambic pentameter. Thanks a ton in advanced.
The way that music evolves is truly great
Adagio strings and simple high hats
To bass lines and rock legends to date
Soothing vocals very fierce rapping spats
The thing is, music is all parts of life
It is a savior from daylong boredom
And is the inspiration, stopping strife
It’s a saving grace that is yet to come
Music is what keeps me awake at night
Focusing on the treble and tune
Interpreting lyrics with all my might
It keeps me in my mood, puts me in my gloom
Searching for good music may be your bane
But after all, it is what keeps you sane
- Experto CredoLv 78 years agoFavourite answer
Initially not, as you do not have ten beats in all lines, so you will need to go back and fix those areas.
- trevathanLv 44 years ago
feels like a spectacular Sonnet to me, the rhyming couplets seem fantastic and that they are very smartly provided. i won't write a Sonnet myself because of the fact i detect i confusing to artwork with the syllables and the rhyming couplets. even nevertheless i won't write one i will know a spectacular one as quickly as I see one :D