melody asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 2 months ago

Does my poem have potential?

Money, my only friend

It doesn’t discriminate, it doesn’t end

It doesn’t feel, it only heals

Money is, my 7th seal

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  • Teva
    Lv 5
    2 months ago
    Favourite answer

    Er......it rhymes 🙂

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  • 2 months ago

    if you change the topic to something positive, it would be better

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  • Anonymous
    2 months ago

    It's a sad poem in every sense.. Sorry.. 🙏🏼

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  • Lôn
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    NO Mildred!!..stop inflicting these terrible 'poems' on us day after day after day.. Find another hobby for suck's fake!

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  • 2 months ago

    Not to me. Sorry.

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  • 2 months ago

    The only thing I like is the 3rd line

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    2 months ago

    Not really. Its a series of rhyming words, but it doesnt have anything else to recommend it.

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