Giving a girl a poem?
I have this girl that I've known for a few years. We've been friends and stopped talking for a while after going to college. But now that I've been seeing her again I just can't help but feel as though I've fallen for her. I'm not very good at expressing my feelings to people but I've written a poem for her that I feel expresses them adequately. In the poem I also addressed the fact she might not feel the same and I accept that she might not. But I'll share the poem and please let me know what you think!
The universe created a girl,
With sky blue eyes and golden hair and skin,
Being around her is its own paradise,
If she were a star she'd be brighter than the moon,
Afraid I am to tell her how I feel,
The feeling of butterfly's and joy when she's around,
When we speak its as if I get a taste of heaven,
Dare I confess this truth to you,
Feelings that may not align with yours,
But here I am writing this for you.
- jimanddottaylorLv 76 months agoFavourite answer
You may not become a poet laureate, but it is a sweet poem. If this was Feb. I would suggest ending it with "Be my Valentine".
Might be the most romantic thing she has experienced.