Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Question

As the many pigeons soared up, a different type of bird flew out of them and away from them.

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Answer 1

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"soared upward", not up. "a bird of a different species emerged from the flock and flew off on its own".

Answer 2

It is grammatically correct, however, the sentence is a little awkward.

As a flock of pigeons took wing, a bird of a different specie flew out from among the flock.