Could you correct the English title?

Question

As a title of a study paper, is this correct or natural? I am not a native speaker of English, so could you kindly check and correct it?

"The effect of the variations of Englishes on high school students: Comparison of American and British English"

Answer 1

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First, I think you buried the lede. I would start with "Comparison of British and American English and the effect of variations on high school students". While that may more clearly define the contents of the paper, I am curious as to what source would compare language variations across the whole of students in two countries.

Answer 2

"Englishes" is not a word. You can say "dialects of English".

Answer 3

The differences of British English and American English on high school students.

Answer 4

"The effects of the variations of the English language on high school students: a comparison of American and British English."

Answer 5

There's no such word as "Englishes."

Answer 6

Englishes  is not right. The topic sounds far too general, but anyhoo:

Comparison of American and British English with reference to the effect of variations between the two on high school students.

Answer 7

Whatever title you choose should not include “Englishes.”  You can say instead, “varieties of English.”